I read this book called THE CLIENT. The book is about a kid and his brother who witness a murder. They were sneaking out of their house to smoke. The kids aren't but 11 to 12 years old. The little kid goes into shock. I would tell more about the book but I don't want to make a plot summary. The book taught me a lesson by if you dont do anything bad, nothing bad will happen to you. If they wouldn't have been smoking, the little kid wouldn't have went into shock. It's saying that don't do things your not suppost to do. You will get caught in a way. Maybe not by your parents but by God.
Thursday, April 19, 2007
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Besides the grammatical errors, you didn't write the full assignment. You were to write about your top five books - not just one.
Also, the sentence you wrote, "If they wouldn't have been smoking, the little kid wouldn't have GONE into shock" isn't correct. If they wouldn't have been smoking, they wouldn't have witnessed a murder that CAUSED the little boy to go into shock. You have it written as if the smoking lead to the shock, which in fact was the murder.
Mrs. C
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